Ukusukela oko ndibukele esi siqendu, bendizibuza ukuba ingaba ndizokulahla uthotho ngokupheleleyo. Ewe, umzimba owoyikisayo ukusuka kwiziqendu ezimbalwa zokuqala sele usetile ibha yomboniso, kodwa kubonakala ngathi i-ante izonyuka kuphela. Ndiza kuqhubeka okwangoku, kuba ndiyincutshe yelensi yekati kunye nempuku, kodwa ukuba kukho into etshintsha, uyifunde apha kuqala.
Qaphela: andizukuthumela mfanekiso mhle. Ayisosantya sam eso; ayisiyiyo IMary Sue ’s isantya.
Izinto ekugqibeleni zitshixela kwindawo ye Ukupasa kwengqondo , kunye elidlulileyo nelangoku ekugqibeleni kubonakala ngathi ziyahlangana. Umboniso uvulwe ngeflash phambili, kodwa ukuqala kwe-arc yayo yokwenyani kuqala nge-flashback: Ityala elaphule uKogami.
Ngelixa wayezama ukujikeleza enye ye-Enforcers yakhe ngetyala, ufumanisa ukuba ngu-Enforcer, Sasayama, kodwa waqhaqheka kwaye wabanda ngumkhenkce kwindawo ephazamisayo. UKogami uqala ukuphambana-kwaye ke uyavuka, kubusuku obubi obugqibe umsebenzi wakhe wamnika imeko yobomi bakhe.
Okwangoku, uGinoza udibana ne-Ofisi yoKhuseleko enkulu enkulu, oxhalabile ngo-Akane. Nangona uGinoza emqinisekisa ukuba u-Akane wenza kakuhle, ngaphandle kokuba nenani elibi lamatyala e-rookie, uxhalabile ukuba u-Akane angaphela njengoKogami, lowo ugaxeleka kwizaphuli-mthetho ezinxaxhileyo nakwii-Enforcers. Ukuba lo mfazi ubonakala ngathi unengxaki ngendlela iPBS ethembele ngayo kwizaphuli-mthetho ezifihlakeleyo, utywina olo phawu ngokusongela uGinoza ngembali katata wakhe, ekubonakala ngathi, ukuyibeka kancinci, ayilunganga.
Yintoni na eyoyikisayo, engenabubhanxa yabasetyhini abaphethe amashishini ama-esque? Yabona, Divergent, iMidlalo yeNdlala, iElysium, njl.
Ngequbuliso, imeko iyatshintsha ijolise kwinqanaba elitsha. Ityala leveki, okanye ubuncinci ukuseta kuyo, liklasi loncwadi kwiziko elibonakala libalaseleyo. Omnye umfundi weehagu akahoyanga intetho katitshala kaShakespeare Ngobusuku beshumi elinesibini (yintoni umboniso ogcwele inkcubeko), kwaye kungekudala uqala i-DMing ngomsebenzisi ongaqondakaliyo noyikisayo. Umsebenzisi utshitshisa ii-comedies zikaShakespeare, endaweni yoko echaza ukuthanda kwakhe iintlekele zikaBard, ngakumbi IMacbeth kwaye UTito Andronicus .
Yikes.
Emva koko, sibuyele ku-Akane, ohleli ngokungaqhelekanga noKagari ngelixa epheka. Njengamaxesha onke, ukhathazekile kwaye unomdla kuKogami; UKagari ucebisa ukuba yinto etyumkileyo, kodwa uyayihleka ngokoqobo. Nangona kunjalo, ekubeni lusana, uAkane wenza impazamo kwibhotile enkulu yewayini (okanye ngenxa?) UKagari ayifumene ekhitshini.
Umceli-mngeni wamkelwe. - UAkane
Njengokuba emphakela ukutya kokwenyani (kule mihla akuqhelekanga) kunye notywala bokwenene (obuye bathatyathelwa indawo lunyango kunye neziyobisi), uKagari uyanxila kakhulu kunaye kwaye uqala ukumgcwalisa kwimbali kaKogami. Oko kukuthi, ukuba ulahlekelwe yi-Enforcer, kwaye ujonge impindezelo kulowo wambulalayo.
U-Akane emva koko ujike waya eShion kunye no-Yayoi, abaxhonywe kunye (inqanawa), malunga netyala eliqhekeze iKogami. I-Shion ikhumbula konke: Ityala le-Specimen, njengoko lalibizwa njalo, yayilityala elinzima, elinengxaki ebandakanya umntu obonisa esidlangalaleni izidumbu ezityatyekiweyo njengeziqwenga zobugcisa zehologram. (Ukutyabeka ngobugcisa bubugcisa bokutshintsha i-viscera yomzimba ngombumba ongamanzi weplastiki, othi emva koko usete kwaye ugcine imixholo yawo kunye.) Iifoto uShion uzinyusa, zincinci nje ngokuba zikwisikrini sombukeli, ziyaxhalabisa- akumangalisi ukuba imizimba , xa kutyhilwa ukuba zizidumbu zokwenyani, kubangele ukuba uxinzelelo lwendawo luphakame kwaye iindaba ezimnyama zisebenze.
Kwakhona, kwimeko apho kwakungabonakali - iShion kunye neYayoi ngokuqinisekileyo benza ububi kunye.
UShiyon uqhubeka ngokunika iinkcukacha zokuba ngelixa uGinoza noKogami bekhangela umbulali, i-Enforcer Sasayama ilandele ityala elahlukileyo-utitshala olahlekileyo ogama linguKozaburo Toma. Kodwa kwinkqubo yokulandela uToma, uSasayama wabanjwa, wabulawa, kwaye ngokuqinisekileyo waba ngumzekelo wokugqibela kwiPhepha lePhepha. Njengokuba uToma wayenyamahlekile, ityala lawela kwilimbo; Malunga nomntu onike uToma izinto zeplastiki ezifunekayo ukwenza iisampulu zakhe, uShion uthe, NguThixo kuphela owaziyo ngokuqinisekileyo.
Ekuvukeni kwazo zonke ezi ndaba zoyikisayo, u-Akane uzama ukugcina ubomi bakhe ngaphandle komsebenzi, edibana nabahlobo bakhe abangenambulelo malunga nesiphelo sasemini esifutshane kakhulu.
Masimenze abonakale ediniwe kangangoko.
Phambi kokuba abizwe nguGinoza, utyhila loo nto — ukumangaliswa! -Ukhathazekile ngoKogami, nto leyo ekhokelela ukuba omnye wabahlobo bakhe acebise ukuba yena noKogami bayafana. Oko, okanye umboniso utyhala nzima kakhulu ukwenza abo baphambili babekho kolunye uhlobo lokufana / ukubopha.
Buyela esikolweni, abafundi ababini baqala ukuhleba malunga nomfundi olahlekileyo. Isikolo sabo, iOuso Academy, yenzelwe ukugcina amantombazana akwiminyaka yokuchaphazeleka ahlukane noluntu-kubonakala ukuba, amafu okufikisa iPsycho Passes. Ukwazi ukuba kukho umfundi olahlekileyo kunokubangela uloyiko phakathi kwabazali, ke amantombazana akholelwa ukuba abalawuli benza iyelenqe lokugcina imfihlo yokunyamalala.
Phakathi kokuhlebeza okuyintombazana, ukungena: OkaRikako Oryo, one-grin-eating grin echaza yonke inkcubeko ye-pop yamantombazana athandwayo.
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URikako, kwelakhe icala, umema amantombazana asetafileni ukuba ajoyine iklasi yakhe yobugcisa, nanjengoko engumongameli welo langaphandle. Ke, intombazana edumileyo kufuneka ifumane ntoni ngokwandisa izibonelelo kwabanye abantu esikolweni?
Emva koko: Umboniso kaRikako uzoba umzobo ongacacanga kakuhle kwiklasi yakhe yobugcisa; Intloko yentombazana enqunyulwe intloko ibekwe kwindawo yakhe, kwaye iintyatyambo zigcwalisa imvelaphi yale ndawo imnandi. Ngaloo mzuzu, intombazana evela kwindawo yokuvula i-academy ingena, kwaye kutyhilwa ukuba uRikako wayenguye owayencokola naye. Kutheni le nto uRikako athathe umdla ngequbuliso emntwini? Owu, kuba ebekhangela iinkcukacha kubomi benye intombazana: Ukuba utata wakhe wesibini uyangqiyama kuye kwaye alale ebhedini yakhe xa engekho, kwaye nePsycho Pass yakhe iyagutyungelwa lilifu.
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URikako uyathuthuzela intombazana, emva koko athi: Umntu onqwenela ukuba nguye. Ixabiso lakho lokwenyani kweli hlabathi. Ngaba awufuni ubuncinci ukuzama ukufumanisa loo nto? Ngomphefumlo ofanayo, unika ibali likaLavinia, intombi kaTito Andronicus: Wadlwengulwa, waqhawulwa, wathuliswa ziintshaba zikayise, ukwenzakala kukaLavinia kwaba yintlungu kunye nehlazo likayise. Oko uRikako akakuxeleli intombazana kukuba uTitus ekugqibeleni ubulala uLavinia.
I-homoerotic overtones kwizigcawu zikaRikako zinika umahluko ophazamisayo kwindlela uShion noYayoi aboniswe ngayo. Ngabom okanye hayi?
Ngaphandle kokuba sizibuze ngo-Akane, sibuyele kuye kunye neqela le-PSB libuza umrhanelwa entliziyweni yetyala le-drone. UShion uphawula ukuba ikhowudi egqithe ukhuseleko lwedrone yayinokufana nekhowudi egqithe iiholograms zikawonke-wonke zikaMido; Umsebenzi, ngokuqinisekileyo, wenkqubo ethile eyintloko.
I-Shion ihambisa zonke ezi ndaba kuphawu lwentengiso, indlela yobungcali.
Umrhanelwa, kwelakhe icala, unyanzelisa ukuba athunyelwe nje ikhowudi, kunye nenqaku elichaza ukuba bobabini umdwelisi kunye naye babenenjongo efanayo: Ukutshabalalisa umzi-mveliso. Iinyani zetyala ziqala ukuba nengqondo, kodwa injongo emva kwayo ayicacanga. Bekuya kuba lula ukufumanisa ukuba umntu othile kule fektri ebengonwabanga… kodwa yintoni eyenze ukuba umntu ajonge kuyo kwasekuqaleni?
I-Kogami, ngesiqhelo, yiyo eqhekeza loo khowudi.
Injongo kunye neendlela. Ukudala ulwaphulo-mthetho kwezi zinto zimbini zingafaniyo.
Kuzo zombini ezi meko, umntu wayefuna ukwenza ulwaphulo-mthetho, kodwa engenazo iindlela zokwenza njalo. U-Kogami ungowokuqala ukubona ukufana kunye neTyala eliQokelelweyo: Utitshala ongafundiswanga ngesiquphe ubeka izandla zakhe kwizinto zokuthambisa aze aphile ngaphandle kwef * cked up, fantasy fantasy yakhe. Kwanele ukukhanyisa umlilo kaKogami, kwaye nangona yena noGino (amagama amathandana amaqabane amnandi!) Ekuqaleni spar malunga nokuba semthethweni kokuxhuma kwengqondo kukaKogami, akukho nto iphakamisa ukuba oku akunjalo.
Ngokubhekisele kumbukeli: Ewe, sele siza kwazi.
Utshintsho lwesimo, uye kwihologram yomthombo onengxolo. Xa abasebenzi bezolondolozo ekugqibeleni beyicimileyo, bafumana isiqwenga sobugcisa esiphazamisayo kwiziko laso: Umzimba obhinqileyo ohamba ze nentloko enqunyulweyo ejolise kwindawo yokugcina amabele, kwaye iintyatyambo, mhlawumbi iiroses, zangqonga zijikeleza. Abasebenzi bacinga ukuba bubugcisa nje obuphazamisayo.
Kwaye emva koko, icebo elikhulu liwela endaweni: UMakishima ngoyena uphambili, kwaye ukhokela uRikako kwiminqweno yakhe eyonakeleyo. Njengoko ezobe umfanekiso okhangeleka uphazamisa njengentombazana eyayimtyelele kwigumbi lobugcisa, uMakishima ubuza uRikako ngenjongo yakhe: Ngaba ucinga ukuba uLavinia wayonwabile? Ekugqibeleni ukhululwe emzimbeni wakhe owaphulwayo? URikako unyanzelisa ukuba uyawathanda amantombazana asembindini wobugcisa bakhe, kwaye uMakishima ucebisa ukuba indlela yakhe yokuwagcina kukuba agcine amantombazana encotsheni yobuhle bawo; Njengentyatyambo ebanjiweyo,
Ngokukhokelwa nguMakima, uRikako uyaqala nje. Kude ibe lilixa elizayo.
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